This story gave me a bad feeling right when the gold car first pulled up. From there it only got worse... For the writing itself I feel like it was far too long for the message it was delivering. It could have been much more compact. The sort of stand-off scene of the guys negotiating with Connie took too long. But also I wish the author would have finished the story, it did leave me wondering what happened to Connie. I like how Arnold was described, it gave me the picture of a creepy guy.
Beware, this song is super depressing but its what I thought of. Also its really brutally gross and inappropriate
Dance With The Devil
I did also think of this song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GQjYPWDcmg its a bit less depressing.
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