Unlike the previous story I did enjoy this one. The writing style was sincere and natural. I liked that the story was written as a list of steps. The factors of race and status influence this piece a lot. I was unsure of the meanings of some things such as, "government cheese." I like how at the end of the story there is the reference to the cheese in the beginning. I think it was interesting how he changes the treatment of the girls based on where they are from.
Im not really sure what advise to give about dating. But I think that I someone stops liking the other they should brake up.
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